Editing – The Journey

Lesson #1 in awesome editors and why we need them.

Pulling the heavy door inward, she ushered Jessa inside before shoving the bolt back into place. The door slammed shut with a resounding thud, shutting out the rest of the estate once more.

I even earned a smiley face as Ashley asked me exactly how Emariya managed to lock the door before it was shut. This passage was critted over 8 times before going to Ashley for editing.